to kneel here

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to kneel here
i am nameless
hemlocks
care less than the deer
where i find pleasure

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Carpe Diem
Pleasure

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“There is pleasure in the pathless woods,
there is rapture in the lonely shore, there
is society where none intrudes, by the deep
sea, and music in its roar; I love not Man the
less, but Nature more.”

Lord Byron

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2 thoughts on “to kneel here”

  1. I keep reading the first three lines again and again – looking to pin down a meaning and then… simply not bothering, getting lost in the imagery and music of the words πŸ™‚
    It takes me all the way back to when I first found BIOLI and was so drawn in by so many of the posts.

    (and I hardly even noticed the ‘erotica’ tag… lol)

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    1. This is another tanka that might perhaps have been just as good as a haiku πŸ™‚
      And what a wonderful comment … I’ve always hoped the words would be musical and flow well … sound and meaning. πŸ™‚

      Looking forward to some more “air time”…. heh heh

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