silence –
the empty creek cradles
sycamore pods


“Oh, you river, you river:
Why are you not full?
…Oh, how could I be full?
People come to drink water.”



Carpe Diem
Universal Jane #1

all my years
floating in the river
a childish heart

love songs
in the flute player’s face

(c) Jane Reichhold


6 thoughts on “silence”

  1. I think this haiku is great Paloma. Maybe not the right choice of words, but I love it. Very well done. Sometimes I also am not happy with what I am creating, but it’s just a short moment in which you create the haiku … so sometimes the word choice, or lines are not what you hoped. No problem … just enjoy the beauty of creating.

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