11 thoughts on “mid-forest”

  1. Yay haiga! 🙂 Yours are always so beautifully composed, visually.

    Text-wise here I like the alliterative Fs in the opening haiku, so soft; for me they suggest someone walking across that forest floor before the harsher sounds of the last two lines when the thunder breaks..

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    1. Thanks Blake 🙂
      I had a blast with this one 🙂
      Still not sure that “thunder-loud” is the best descriptor but it was all I could come up with. So many crackles and clicks and scrapes when a leaf lands … but it is frightfully loud when all is quiet. Must be deafening to squirrels 😉

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